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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">经典句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多经典句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">As everyone knows, No one can deny that…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Honesty</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Travel by Bike</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Youth</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">A recent statistics shows that …</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">结尾万能公式:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多过渡短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5"></font></u></a>&nbsp;</p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作的“七项基本原则”:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">一、 长 短 句原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">二、 主 题 句原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">三、 一 二 三原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">8)most important of all, moreover, finally</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)</font></p>
<p><font color="#000080"><font face="Impact" size="5">10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)</font></font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">四、 短语优先原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I cannot bear it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I want it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。</font></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-8-17 19:50:29 | 只看该作者
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">五、 多实少虚原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! </font></p>
<p><font color="#000080"><br/><font face="Impact" size="5"></font></font>&nbsp;</p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">六、 多变句式原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1)加法(串联)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">其它的短语可以用:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2)转折(拐弯抹角)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The coat was thin, but it was warm.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多的短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding</font></p>
<p><font color="#000080"><font face="Impact" size="5">3)因果(so, so, so)</font></font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The snow began to fall, so we went home.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">举例:This is what I can do.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">When to go, Why he goes away…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">5)附加(多此一举)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">6)排比(排山倒海句)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">七、 挑战极限原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">文章主体段落三大杀手锏:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">一、举实例</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5"></font>&nbsp;</p>
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英语写作万能公式

<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">经典句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多经典句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">As everyone knows, No one can deny that…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Honesty</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Travel by Bike</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Youth</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">A recent statistics shows that …</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">结尾万能公式:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多过渡短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作的“七项基本原则”:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">一、 长 短 句原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">二、 主 题 句原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">三、 一 二 三原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">8)most important of all, moreover, finally</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)</font></p>
<p><font color="#000080"><font face="Impact" size="5">10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)</font></font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">四、 短语优先原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I cannot bear it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I want it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。</font></p>
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