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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">五、 多实少虚原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! </font></p>
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<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">六、 多变句式原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">1)加法(串联)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">其它的短语可以用:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">2)转折(拐弯抹角)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The coat was thin, but it was warm.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多的短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding</font></p>
<p><font color="#000080"><font face="Impact" size="5">3)因果(so, so, so)</font></font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The snow began to fall, so we went home.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多短语:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">举例:This is what I can do.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">When to go, Why he goes away…</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">5)附加(多此一举)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">6)排比(排山倒海句)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">七、 挑战极限原则</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">写作绝招</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">文章主体段落三大杀手锏:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">一、举实例</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">更多句型:</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5">To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example</font></p>
<p><font face="Impact" color="#000080" size="5"></font> </p>
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